Just the Thought

Just the Thought

I think to myself why

Now all I do is want to cry

I have paid for my sin

All the devils start to grin

I will not go to hell

I will never dwell

This is the story of pain

You will never see or hear the tears of rain

Silently i cry

Wait for you to come take me for who knows why

 I am waiting

Mr.Devil there is no more debating

Have fun

You'll never catch me on the run

By: Riley Ellis

      

Reviews

[Scarlet]

I'm sorry you've a hard time in life, but I think its great that you've found a creative outlet. I hope writing helps you with the hard times. Its a very nice poem, and I think its relatable that just a thought makes you want to cry. I enjoyed it. Good luck, Riley.

[Crowley]

Hard to out run em but it’s necessary. The past can be a devil for sure, with the only road available is to face and beat him once and for all. Good job!!!

[Paul Bell]

When life gives you lemons, make lemonade. You just know the tosser who wrote that had it easy.
You have a story to tell, keep telling it. Ten words from you are probably worth more than a hundred from our Politicians.

[Shineheemi]

Acceptance, like surrendering and hoping. Just enough for those hidden feelings and unseen actions. Ilke your poem.