Bear

First peom I ever wrote about my cat, I was about 14.

 

An angel that has fallen from the heavens. His eyes shin like diamonds. I look into his eyes and begin to believe I am at the beach. His roars are louder then an elephant. He is a vacuum, eating anything on his food bowl. Softer then a feather, big and squishy. His heart is bigger then his stomach. Fat, but beautiful and pure. He is my baby and will always be.

Reviews

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I liked this. It has a very vivid image. I like that it is about your cat. I am so not good at writing about animals (not the human kind lol)!!! Very good poem!

[thecoolone52]

ohhh its about your cat....... i thought it was about your fat signifigant other or whatever hahahahaha anyway nice poem....... i really liked the imagrey and the vacum line!!!