Gone

It is importent to have the memories of lost friends.

 

I have left

I am gone

To another place

It has been so long

Remember me

Or I shall fade

Remember me

For I am away

A new life

A new story

Always restarting

But never forgotten

I try to remember them

Bad memory clouding vision

I have forgotten some of the faces

Even now they remember me

Even though I don’t see

I remember them

Only because they remember me

Please remember me

Or I shall disappear

To live only to be forgotten

Is to not live at all

Remember me or I will die

For the memory

The memory is all that keeps me alive

 

Reviews

[phantom]

Rin as a friend I'm going to say this poem I like it in almost the same way the others I have read at lunch I'm tending to like this one better than them I also think u should show it to orange and if u want to maybe Barnes and Carr and Q'uae. But hey it is just my opion.

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This is really good. I loved the flow and the syntax. Very good poem!

[forsaken_beauty]

Very good poem. It flows and reads very well. We all have the fear that we won't be remembered when we're gone, so this is very easy to relate to.