My Love

Your smile brightens my day 

Your laugh curls my lips 

To form a smile you can not forget 

Your touch brings joy 

And makes my boy scream oh boy 

Your voice is an angel singing 

And soothes me to sleep 

Like a song from heaven 

That only you and god have a key 

Sometimes I'm scared to sleep 

I don't want you to be a dream 

I can not keep 

I can not express how I feel 

But know that my love is real 

Reviews

[RDOriginal]

This is very cute and honest. It's not a weighty piece of gothic, romantic poetry but I like the fact that it is clearly heartfelt. If you wanted to edit anything I'd say keep the joy/o boy moments and hold back on the angels singing (angels have been just about done to death by poets over the years!)