Nothing Ever Changes

This is a poem that I wrote when I was sick

NOTHING EVER CHANGES

 

 

Looking from a distance

Feeling so abandoned

Leaving unresolved feelings remaining behind

Why make them greater, simply let them go

Besides nothing ever changes

When nothing is ever done

Feel with your heart

Meditate intensively

For nothing ever changes

When nothing is ever done

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

I like this. Alot.
In this piece it seems as though you have come to a profound realization.
The line "Why make them greater, simply let them go" is incredibly true and so is the line
"For nothing ever changes
When nothing is ever done"
You've written this with such depth and understanding.
Amazing write!
I'm adding it to my favorites.
-Elissa :)

[[iknowthatyouknow]]

I really like this poem ,
i really like your line "For nothing ever changes / When nothing is ever done"
That really makes me think ;
Good job !