A wished call

There was a thought which came speaking

 that u'll call one day with feelings..

it'll be chocolate to my ears,

happiness to no ends dear.

 mere may be a call for her

but 4 me its a step to cloud nine gears.

for i don have her number

i'll wait for her anonymous call

thousand eight miles away from a land,

on to the rings of my phone lying on this coastal sand.

In wait of an unknown call

thinking that it will fill me with Ecstasy for lifelong

i wait, i wait in patience for a call

when doesn't matters me

all it does is a call

 just some words

to say hi

to this murdered odd,

i wait ,i wait for ur particular call.

For i want  to fill your voice in my dumb dreams

i want u to stay with me on the call

a little long

etching  the very perfect pitch of ur voice

 throughout that beautiful talk

on to the dreams of this blank mind

i want u to stay,

i want u to stay ,

with me on A call

how cliche of me

i still hold that old style

but what i'll say is

its good to remember u

in that dumb dreamy life...

Reviews

[Muse]

Dumb dreamy life?

Wishful thinking does have a funny of have filling ones head with irrational thoughts and false hopes. The best part of the poem for me...

that u'll call one day with feelings..
it'll be chocolate to my ears,
happiness to no ends dear.


Comparing a voice to the likes of chocolate..how clever. :))

[Rishabh Shaw]

its always good to hope for hope is a good thing perhaps the best of all good things.. ^^