Dead Inside

everyone cries,

       reaches out,

               I can't help.

what can i do?

       I break down,

               the world falls.

no one cares.

       they look shattered,

                pieces of glass.

standing alone,

       a roomful of mirrors,

                glass shards stab.

my heart bleeds.

       my mind numbs.

                my life leaves.

Author's Note

I tried to make it as parallel as possible, but it isn't as perfect as I want it.

Reviews

[Adam :P]

this one is also good, it seemed like there should be more here tho,