Trying

This is an excerpt of the poem entitled "Trying".

Trying to perceive the shattered piece of me 

Rupturing yet detaining as well as entering in my sanity 

Trying to reminisce those instance so as one we were 

Moments we treated ourselves more than everything nor an utopian lover 

Author's Note

Hope you'll like the excerpt.

Reviews

[Kittenincake]

A lot of hidden emotion seeping through the text. Well done.

[rlphlit]

Thank you! Hope you'll like the full version of these poem.

[Kittenincake]

Sounds good

[rlphlit]

Again, thanks to you!

[Richard McLin]

I did, I did like the exert. Not gonna lie though, bit peeved I don't get more. Fantastic and emotional. Loved it.

[rlphlit]

Thank you so much! Hope you'll like the full version of these poem. I'll be publishing it soon.