(((((Ripples)))))

Haiku

Juvenile waters,
Blemishing youthful surface:
With liquid wrinkles.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

Oh yes ~

[Raven]

Nice way of personifying water. I didn't think it was possible but you proved it is. Good work.

[kayla garcia]

kool i like it

[Journey]

Raul, you are the man...the Haiku Man! I really like the way you look at nature and write from that perspective. Look at you! Even getting creative with your title presentation!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Raul,

Like your work with the pictures right along side...You don't recognize me...Sunflower

[Thomas Fleet]

Gosh. You share yet another, amazingly written and vivid poem. You continue to display your skills in creating a detailed image in the form of a haiku.
Thank you for sharing and I hope to see more. Keep writing. :D