Cloud Shoals

Haiku

Shoal of passing clouds,

Swimming oceanic skies:

From horizon shores.

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

Oh my god! I love this~
I always think, when I look at the sky, like it's like the ocean only upside down and whatnot... only, I have yet to figure out how to capture that in poem! So I admire you so much for this!
Great write!

[Thomas Fleet]

Great poem! I love the view of clouds over the ocean.
Line 2 is just amazing. "Swimming oceanic skies;"
Only you could write something like that! :D
Thanks for sharing.