Nature’s Breath

Haiku

Chilly horizons,

Nature yawns a misty dawn:

Vapors fog the trees. 

Reviews

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... "chilly horizons"? ... spicy ... "vapors fog the trees" ... dark ... a great read ... i think though that you have the skill to come up with a greater title ... just my opinion ... i could be wrong ...

[Gheeneil]

I like how you described nature's breath. Simple but well-thought of.

[happy girl]

That described what you thought nature's breath was very well. I could just see the fog setting in on a forest floor in the early morning. Nicely written. :D

[Nameless]

Good description.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great one...Seems to crontradictory in that the sun is so bright...Beautiful though...Sunflower