Brought Up To The Water Ripples

thinking over

a-blur together

I'm blending in

there's more

been better

as from afar

many belong

in what was said aways

deep shock

lightning bolt

moving across

catches our eyes that dance

blissfully done

enraptured on

in the branches concise

rewires memory

energy brought up wells

to the water ripples

against the dark

I can see it

up there over me

stars gazing wherefore

art though it hurt

seen around

on rocks

down to earth

then to life beyond

my dreams

my aims

ain't it situations

understands, sustains

never ends

what means that

red shapes to me

or any color brightest

I don't mind mysteries

found of darkness

that passes around us

and sweet by and by

was always same

a-different look

where-by inside

the fair light

I'm to yonder

yonder hill

window-frame flown

as from home

without discard

O' breathe

O' conquer

find over comprehension

is not memorization

forget the memories

was it to beyond set me free space

hello bumblebee all abuzz focus, point

expects today as roses

to be small

be careful verse blends prose

beholden in open air

joys to take you

on places, me

O' it's mostly

O' nothing can say

I lost my composition reads

something on your clouds puffs out my world

waves writing on was flawed brakes down all rain

you're a little bit

too late

too sad

last chance fountains

let's get ahead

slipping by

and falling fast

as from beneath the past

on the hard benches

birds in the marble park

as from those

broken arrows starts and flies

of stories very close

otherwise it's my heart

side by side

and how many above shine

stumble over each word

mine in this left'd behind

thru woods to floors beautiful spots

neat and tidy

often in marks

on another world

on other levels

running up hills

quick to put through

the darkness

I'm still here

to what should be off

ready for thoughts

removes all

separating the question

of new leaves old

at last seen

steady stream

those around loose sand

thinking over

a-blur together

enraptured on

in the branches

I had seen through this

there's more water

in this a-lot spins

those around loose sand

it won't ever saw moving

all's goes forward poems

and I am darkened

inside crumbles

to avoid who, us for,

had you known

you knew releases

the rain falls unknown

expresses how

a-piece of it rolls on down

without energy to behold 

brought up wells

to the water ripples

instructions toss'd

in my converses hits the carriage

like I never better had it

almost begotten me

a-dawn before time

shining today

was bright on wires thought up

high-tops right here

to stay it's my heart

releases tides

alone at times passing by

all laced up I got it glorious in my mind

wonders under the solid moon

that escapes my room light was some

slant after midnight why so low

a special star empty pursues something

has also me to choose dreams persist

befell quite hard

hits by a-gust of wind

forward poems

all's I got is this box

it grows inside

gone without worries

why not, awhilest can wait till

I let it up

broken off

unfallen away

within leaves free

in energy scenery

through ripples

there's more dawns

nature's still anew

thinking it o'er

a-blur together
we felt O forward

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Reviews

[Lorne Blaine]

I'm confused, yet I believe the pace should have this effect on the reader. If so, you did a great job and, regardless, I like it.