I am feeling swell ~ Brave & Daring My dear muse on preserves.

together it's you and me, afterwards glows opens at Real Night Owl True Cafe Spirits on/off.

whose may sooner embrace celebrates art there wares forever in the folds
ah, Covers all & all, Gives me full steam ahead,
If rather than, pulls out the grass dead
I'm - Rowing, Rowing, Showing, We're making ado
amore or less let's go asleep.

~ Shines not sure in-thru sands beholds & belongs uneven & that's so altho' be a-glowing the decline so fast down a-long window

Later on in tin cups shap'd out,
of a-glass bottom with handles & caps off.
many may want joy what now
gots tough howso to a-few rocks short about
In times inclines a-spot to compile mines
of a-breeze a-grew tender in amongst they can be
A-wooden drum hollow greens
Livin' them trees are embarks anew'd moon
Got us Thru this now two lights one line at,
Probability today beams
So electrical below to go out again; There,
Was scatter'd - Hope's sure. As a-bottle has a-top;

Yes, Dreams up flowing on a-lost lake
still found beautiful remakes it twirl, the long way home so kind
swirls around shells one free universal time aback forwards upon
unforgettable me pretty as things be how high a-footpath I tend
broke downstream now & then bends on & on

~ Shines not sure throws it in & that's so dent'd
I can altho' be a-glowing in a-green pen image blows
my red, red roses creates passes
Later on & on the river's anew waters await high

is what's betwixt'd us, Merrily, Merrily, Merrily & me
thoughts was uttermost wanton in the wakes
from longing many said we has heard said;
Woe! Showers thy whims? Souls shines finualy on
a-brand new box of pieces

alike so? Seems so a-lifetimes ago of you & I tries
& sees; Glowing, Following days signs fast drawing balance
thru & thru tending to bells unto a-vase swells in scenes made
fell as parts hearts well read, Unknowing-show
changes my times fleeting up to now
& feels much better.

~ Shines not sure throws it in & that's so altho' be
a-glowing, a-going
Later on & on the river's anew waters

inputs by open boats I love you let's get hurried slow
happy souls thinks St. Valentine's Day
I not but lost thy thirst,
loosely add'd, Kiss, Kiss, Kiss me my dear muse does exist with you.

whose may embrace celebrates their wares forever
n the folders from sheets
to sleeves torn this piece
ah, Covers all & all, Gives me full steam ahead,
I'm - Rowing, Rowing, Showing, We're making ado
amore or less lets go asleep.

~ Let shines not sure throws it all around me & that's
so awesome before two glowing blue pails
Hangs so blank above
it's the decline that's so fast
& romantic whiles I pick berries with you

Later on & on times there on
The river knows it yet ? There, we found
Now is, oh, forever.
Cast scenes far right leaves will swell
catch it up to make,
From your pillow
you, me ~ no waves

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

The fractured lines, lend to the racing emotion within the piece, almost like the reader must rush to the next for that clue here and there, well done, good read.