Intense Flash of Poetry O' it has I You know right word to throw

Stand aside I let go within open air have
balloon will travel convey'd middle between
My swift sweet darling,
I'm soaring skies bent aback lawn.
Fair round'd portrait hath been
given declines to turn mountains
Great emotions felt blindin' lights in with,
begins drifts of lakes.
A-narrow word got a-narrow door
on the other side roof is,
Oblivious continues as now hands
down I found why leaves
Only one thought here
O goes behind together
again a-look from push upon
a-muse both hinges at a-nail; Up
on the flip will the sun come
out tomorrow I'll do it scatter'd
& expos'd so go; The ends in a-print
for then shuts loud; No automatic ten.
Times better than that adventure &
it mightn't see shells whirls cans
be oceanside so thereby are waves starts
me to imbark dew toss'd; Thank you thru
changes for freein' us at where that
quiet be as long end from the loops
forever produced Autumn full stop
perhaps to eat, what makes a-great magic
moment switch'd unto a-fabric;
Walls, blocks, clocks not set to thee solitude
moves you O late! Homeward bound;
All & all descriptive on a-walk I found blows
deep o'er ye hills in a-bit

Reviews

[Jansy]

Wow, Robert, this is a wild, exhilarating ride. The way your words twist and spiral feels like floating through an ever-changing landscape, part dream, part flight, part raw emotion. Each line carries its own momentum, yet somehow the whole piece lands like a breeze brushing over hills. It’s chaotic, luminous, and completely alive