Is it him?

.....its a poem.its probably the worst thing here.it short.

I dont know whats so special about him. It could be his smile.Or the way he resembles a child everytime he laughes.It could be his eyes.Or it could be his voice.....but maybe...it could just be him.

Author's Note

ignore aany errors please!tell me..am i any good?like..at all?

Reviews

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

Love the words. though short but simple and understandable.
But try to fix it and make it more like a poetry type. ( i just mean, arrange it. divide the sentences then put it in the middle.) *I don't mean any harm* ^_^
Keep it up. there's still more ideas to come, you're still young anyway.
--->Rei Zy.

[rayvven]

thanks! but wat do you mean with 'arrange it. divide the sentences then put it in the middle.'

[Ermadski Erma & Rei Zy]

I think what Rei meant to say was somewhat like this:

[ I dont know whats so special about him.
It could be his smile.
Or the way he resembles a child every time he laughs.
It could be his eyes.
Or it could be his voice.....
but maybe...
it could just be him.]

Something like that then put it in the middle or on the side, that is all.
But it's really up to you on how you put it.
Just arrange it since it's quite short but it's good ^_^
Keep up the good work.
Good luck.

[rayvven]

kk.i'll see wat ii can do(: