SUMMER NIGHT

THEME FOR A SUMMER NIGHT

Slashed stars

White scars

Hot light

Steel bright

Black sky

Burnt dry

Whiplash

Heat flash

Red moon

Rain soon

Reviews

[Taylor]

What a beautiful poem, Marie. I could see this framed in a lovely golden frame with a delicate line of lapis. I guess I thought of framing bec I just bought an illuminated manuscript which I' need to frame. Anyway, this truly is a lovely piece -- it's simplicity is just elegant. Thank you for sharing it.

[Marie]

Thanks. But I feel this poem is too harsh for something as delicate as gold.

[Nonnye]

Hey I was going to pick out one of your stories to review after you had reviewed "Jeramy" but I enjoyed them all and couldn't provided any feedback except that. Then I found this. This is one I could read over and over and let my imagination run into something new each time. Excellent. Glad you posted this.
Nonnye

[Marie]

Thank you this kind of verse if fun to do.

[David O Whalen (O Haol..]

Marie I posted a poem titled "Soft summer night" just a while back. Mine was a lot longer than yours, but yours says more with half as many words and I like it twice as much. The bold black typeface and font adds a good touch also. It's like most of your comments: short and to the point!

[Marie]

Mine is not better than yours, just different. You describe the softness of a summer night, while I describe its harshness.

[NeiL ArandA]

When I see à red sky its almost predictable that it will be raining soon . Its amazing that they give us warning signs . or heads up in the coming days .

[wordman]

well you did a great job marie
where did you get the picture

[Marie]

Thank you. I got the picture off the Internet; I don't even know what place it is.

[wordman]

you are welcome,

[mlundstedt]

Very nice! This is not easy to do.

[Marie]

No it's not, but I enjoy dong it.

[Woody]

takes talent to make these two-line poems. always true to form, Marie.

[Marie]

I'm not sure about talent but these are challenging and fun to do.

[Woody]

you've said the magic word, fun. if you're having fun then you can't but excel.

[Wordpress]

The better part of rhyming lives here.

[Marie]

Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I can feel the heat now. Nicely done.

[Marie]

Thanks. I just finished another one like this called "Shore Line".

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Cool, I will need to check it out.