SUNRISE

Another sunrise poem

SUNRISE

 

Clouds of grey that hide the light

Part as stars blink out of sight.

Rays of dawn are bright and bold,

Trimming silver clouds with gold.

Reviews

[Drew Given]

This sounds like something a Tolkien character would say. That's the highest praise I can give.

[Marie]

Well that's high praise indeed.

[Melinda McQueen]

How pretty. Such a way in capturing the beauty of a sunrise.

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Beccy]

'Another sunrise poem.' you note, the words almost dismissive.

I have to gently disagree, A sunrise stirs the heart and soul and needs to be eulogised for both it's beauty, and the glorious new day it heralds.

Much enjoyed. Beccy.

[Marie]

Well thank you. If I seemed dismissive about this poem, it's just that I've written so many of them.

[wordman]

so look at the sight as the beauty unfolds just like marie foretold
see the stars s they go out o sight,butstill see the beauty of the night

[Marie]

Well, yes the night is beautiful; so is the light; we need both for contrast.

[wordman]

the day for work,and the night for love lol

[Woody]

each sunrise is more beautiful than the last. amazing. you should put them together as a collection. your choice of the pictures is astounding, Marie.

[Marie]

I don't know--sometimes I feel as if I'm just writing the same words over and over again, putting them in slightly different forms.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Lovely descriptive poetry--precious and precise.
Difficult to imagine sunrise better portrayed.
Outstanding, Marie!

[Marie]

Thank you. But I can't to justice to the pictures of sunrises (or sunsets) that I find here and there.

[sheriH 2]

Pure brilliance , short sweet and captivating. The worlds just work so smoothly well done.
-sheri