NGHTFALL

A poem about night...

Evening drops its bars of grey,

Shutting out the last of day

Clouds like tattered purple lace

Take the sunlight’s golden place

 

Diamond tips begin to show,

Circling a silver glow

Day is coloured loveliness

Night is beauty gone to rest.

Reviews

[Workvio]

An absolutely sweet and beautiful little poem that says all it needs to say without tons of verses ... I really enjoyed this poem

[Marie]

Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Mick Burke]

"Clouds like tattered purple lace". A beautiful description. Great poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"night is beauty gone to rest"---love that line...

this is your usual power in brevity type write.
amazing imagery packed into a small frame.

j.

[Marie]

Thanks. I like that line too...

[Woody]

perfect description. you manipulate colours like a dexterous juggler.
gorgeous one, Marie.

[Marie]

Thanks you. I think it's a little better than my usual...

[Perkele.7885]

Eight lines of loveliness. I felt in color here. I want a white crisp cool memory pillow.

[Marie]

That sounds just wonderful...

[Perkele.7885]

I will sleep so nice

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
This is beautiful, wording is fantastic and a picture to mirror!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Marie]

Thank you.

[wordman]

a very pretty write marie and the picture just as good

[Marie]

Thank you.

[wordman]

my pleasure marie