RAIN

falling rain...

Rain, with silver, silken grace,

Falls in folds of silver lace,

Holds the sky in soft embrace

As the thirsty earth gives praise.

Reviews

[Soundz]

Awesome imagery.
I greatly enjoyed the delicacy I felt from your view of rain. It's one of those things that gets taken for granted, but the joy you have when you see it is full blown appreciation.
Great work!

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Great flow and wonderful descriptions:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Marie]

Thanks for your comments on this tiny poem.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

You had shown me the other side of the rain. Very nice and rainy!

[Julia Mars]

Something so mesmerizing about the patter of rain.
Beautiful poem.

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Julia Mars]

You're welcome, was my pleasure.

[Ben Noah Suri]

Liked the description of Rain. 'Silken grace' and 'silver lace' neatly describes rainfall and leaves a beautiful image in the mind

[Marie]

Thanks. Most of my poems are meant to create images.

[Marie]

Thanks. Most of my poetry is meant to create images.

[Roland Petrov]

The first two lines especially are nothing short of perfection. The enchantment is undoubtedly enhanced by the alliteration.

[Marie]

Thank you; that's what I was trying for.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the way you write these short, strong poems...so much effect from the rhythm...

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Tom McRoberts]

Wonderful write. There's so much focus in this that I can feel the exact tempo of the rain you describe. You've got a real knack for nature writing. Your poetry is pure escapism for a city-boy like myself!

[Marie]

Thanks. I too live in the city.

[An owl on the moon]

This is simply stunning... how it awakens the heart and mind to the beauty and wonder of rainfall... and enchants the soul to this singular moment...

[Mick Burke]

A great description of rain in just four lines. The alliteration and rhyming make it just roll off the tongue.