SHORE LINE

The Gulf...

Wild surf

Bronze turf

Gulls land

Gold sand

High tide

Waves ride

Ships pass

Sea grass

Flecked foam

Slides home.

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Well written!
Great flow and imagery,
that beautiful photo doesn't hurt any either:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Marie]

Thanks. I think the photo is more effective than the poem, actually.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Amazing write, a short but well written work

[Marie]

Thank you.

[BelfastBhoy69]

Concise, precise and so very descriptive in such a short burst of words. I can almost hear the sea.....

[Marie]

Thanks. I'm glad you got that out of it...

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I see yet another master piece of art. Glad to read...

[wordman]

this is a great way to describe your vision,loved it marie

[Esha Chakravarty]

Very beautiful description of the shoreline indeed!!!

[Devanshu Rajput]

I wonder how so short a poem can describe a shoreline so beautifully.

A beautiful piece of write.

Devanshu

[Sheila Kline]

Beautiful description of the shoreline with vivid description tied up in a package of only 20 words - no small feat so I commend you for describing it as well as you have!! The image is also perfect!
Great job!!!

[Marie]

Thank you, Sheila. Yes, I really like that picture.

[Mick Burke]

This is how to perfectly describe the shore line using only 20 words. Really good!

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Woody]

I'm enthralled by your two-word lines, Marie. and what a picture you painted with your words!
it's true you make it look simple.

[Marie]

It's not simple, but I enjoy doing these poems.