SHORE LINE

A Poem by Marie

The Gulf...

Wild surf

Bronze turf

Gulls land

Gold sand

High tide

Waves ride

Ships pass

Sea grass

Flecked foam

Slides home.

© 2015 Marie

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Gaston Villanueva

Gaston Villanueva

With 20 words you painted a vivid picture of the ideal shore line
I like the simplicity of this Marie

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you. These "simple" poems are not as easy as you would think.

ahhhh great last 2 lines.......Coastline NOT so golden and blue here but the concept is the same

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

I haven't seen a coastline myself in 10 years.

10 Years Ago

I remember you saying as much before...As you know. I live by the sea....Do not know for how long th.. read more

No words wasted here Marie. Perfect description with only a few words. Excellent! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 18, 2015
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Marie

San Antonio, TX

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I have been writing for almost 60 years. Writers' Cafe is the best writing site I've found. If you send me read requests, expect me to be blunt. I don't like poor grammar, misspelled words or mistake.. more..