CARLOS DID MY YARD!

My yard was an overgrown mess...

CARLOS DID MY YARD!(Senyru)

 

I saw a jungle

Carlos came with his magic

Now I see beauty.

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Hah-ha, I wish you'd send Carlos over here. Nice words, Marie.

[Marie]

Thanks. Carlos does my yard every spring. Incidentally, he's ot a gardner nore a landscaper. He's a contractor and cuts my yard as a favor.

[Sheila Kline]

And Carlos saw a job to do, and knew exactly how to get it done!!
Clever write that says so much!!

[Marie]

Thank you. I don't know what I'd do without Carlos.

[Sheila Kline]

A good gardener is hard to find!! I am glad you have him to help you!!

[Woody]

I'll never understand how you, poets, can write these tiny Japanese poems and manage to convey a clear idea.
still, a good one Marie. refreshing.

[Marie]

Thanks. I was really inspired this time.

[An owl on the moon]

Never did a senyru make me feel such joy! I know what it is to have a world overgrown and rambling... and to find help to make it an Eden again? Oh, that's the best!

[Marie]

Carlos does my yard every spring. By that time it really does look lke a jungle.

[Gaston Villanueva]

This is really cool Marie
Great job!

[Marie]

Thank you. A great job is what Carlos did.

[don't know]

I'm a big fan of Japanese verse.Always happy to read a senyru or haiku. well done

[Marie]

Thank you.