just because

i sat here....

thinking.

i know i need to forgive and forget

but i cant seen to get it through my head.

 

but i finally understood.

just because we are apart...

doesn't mean i hate you.

just because this is where our love lead...

doesn't mean its dead.

 

i really hope you do something with your life...

i really do.

hate is a strong word...

but love is too...

 

you were my first.

don't ever doubt that ill never forget you.

your name will forever linger inside me and out.

like a witches curse...

just killing me.

 

nobody EVER made me feel the way you made me feel.

nobody EVER will.

don't you get that?

i guess im finally understanding whats real.

 

but now that its over...

just understand.

i love you.

and just because our love bloomed...

then died out...

i  have always loved  you, more than you ever knew.

 

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=just+because#/d25r27q <--- photo credit

Reviews

[Dani]

Not to piss you off (because you said "non-believers" drive you insane), but it's hard to say that nobody will ever make you feel that way again when you're so young. I'm not saying you can't be in love, I'm just saying it's hard to be sure about something that nobody honestly knows (save for God). Those thoughts are rarely stable. What you may want to take into consideration is that you have your entire life ahead of you. Last time I checked, the future is unknown.

Of course, you don't necessarily have to agree with my opinions. I'm just thinking out loud for a while. Sorry.

And no, I'm not some random adult trying to tell you right from wrong. I'm your age. So take it all with a grain of salt, por favor :) Anywho, regardless, I liked the poem and it was a good read. Thanks for sharing.

[*Evelen*]

This is sad it reminds me of my past. I went through something very like this and thought i would never be okay but in the end i found someone much much better. This was a beautiful poem i loved it. Thank you for sharing.

This is amazing! Very very good job. :)

[r]

This is my favorite poem of yours that I've read so far. It's just...one of the most beautiful poems put there. I love the way you did the form and font, and the picture is beautiful. This is so sad, and so sincere.... Heart-wrenching. (: But I love it.

[cfix]

I just loved how you started this out, it gripped my attention. This is a real amazing write from your heart. Enjoyable read. I liked this write alot. Thought it was set up wonderful.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Now that was a beautiful Poem! Great Job!

[Jami Nicole]

I'm speechless. Do you have any idea how amazing this is? Love, love, love it. :)

~Love, Jami~