scream

scream

A Poem by just take a breath

why do you put up with it?
the crap that people give you
why do you cry?
when there are other ways to get through

stand up for you beliefs
throw and push things!
tell them what they don't want to hear
their listening.

get their attention
stand up
make some noise!

get your point through
scream loud!
scream free!
use your voice!

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=scream&order=9&offset=96#/dj1qx2 <--- photo credit

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Okay, this is so good. It has a good meaning, and it's written in a good way. I especially love the "tell them what they dont want to hear" part, because I think too many people these days try too hard to just do whatever it takes to be 'popular' or get the guy or whatever, instead of being themselves and standing up to people.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can't use my voice
Its why i write
I can't make any noise
That is why i am confined
Seriously good, you were able to make it kinda a speech and a poem at once
Thats hard to do, and thats why i am in love with your talent

Posted 15 Years Ago


So true. You should stand up for what you believe.

Posted 15 Years Ago


If you have something to give, then by all means, give it.
Good write.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2010
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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..