Mindfulness - Haiku

A Poem by Rogie-Dodge

Updated

Aware of breathing
Observing thoughts and feelings

Like clouds in the sky

© 2014 Rogie-Dodge

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Brittany Zedalis

This is simply beautiful to me.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks you so much Brittany. I'm glad you liked it :D

Vidya Bacchus

Is it supposed to be "as the drift away"? or did you forget the "Y" in they?Otherwise very nice:P

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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12 Years Ago

Ooops... fixing it now !!
Thanks !!

12 Years Ago

You are welcome:P

11 Years Ago

I've changed it completely now .. I think I like the new version better :D

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Added on December 19, 2013
Last Updated on January 31, 2014

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Rogie-Dodge

Newcastle, NSW, Australia

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Just me. Got some major issues to deal with. Geeky, Aspie, Techy, Cheeky. === I'll be going away in a month or two. Maybe for a number of years. I won't have access to internet for putting.. more..