Love

Love.

Needed.

Begged for.

Teased.

Not released.

Touched.

Not needed.

Tortured.

Pain.

All of these things remain.

Yet who feels the pain?

Reviews

[QuietlyCrash]

Very short and written very well. I like how you made it the format look like a flame. Very clever.

[ron]

I didnt notice that beore. It just happened. Thank you for showing me that.

[Sami Khalil]

Short poem but good . I like the form too...:)

[ron]

Thank you. I read one that was short like that and thought i wouold try it.

[Sami Khalil]

I unsderstand ...You are welcome...:)