Tempest’s Love

Tempest’s Love

Tempest moonlights through the haze.

Take me now and let me be your prey.

 

Your waters refresh my empty soul.

Take me now forever more.

 

Dreams of love long past in time.

Take me now and shine your light.

 

Dripping passion from my lips.

Taste me now my or let me part.

 

My trembling fingers reach to you.

Take the now or pass me fear.

 

An embrace from you is all I ask.

To show you how I long for your love to last.

 

Taken in the innocence of time.

My love for you will last though time.

 

Give to me your love so true.

I will show you of my love for you.

 

 

 

Reviews

[dw817]

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Another heartfelt and emotion poem, Ron.
I'm not sure if you wanted to say, "prey" or "pray." Usage of the way you have it here is certainly acceptable if you are seeking a ferocious and voracious lover. :)

[ron]

Thanks for catching that for me I did meant to say pray and not prey.

[dw817]

Keep it as prey if you want to have a hidden meaning to it. :9 Oof ... I see you already corrected it ...

[ron]

Hidden meaning hmm....I like that. Her I go again lol.

[dw817]

If you REALLY wanna word that correctly with 'prey,' change it to, "let me be your prey."
Up to you tho. :7

[ron]

Thank you that works much better.

[AnnaLeQuinn]

This is not bereft of passion at all. This is fabulous. Makes me want to taste their lips. Sounds like a honeysuckle in the summer. Yum.
Anna

[poetdoug]

Dripping passion from my lips; taste me now or let me part."
Wow, I love the way you employ all five senses in your lovely poem. It's a poem that you can,
Taste, Feel, Touch, See, and Hear the words all at once. Beautiful , my Friend.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Wall of Words]

That's a sweet way of telling a girl you love him. I would be flattered if someone said something like that to me. and blushing like crazy to. Haha.
Great poem! Sweet, yet deeply emotional.
Sylvia.

[ron]

Thank you. That Im afraid are words let for the heart of the one I have yet to met. I am extreamly flatered and honored you like this poem.