Endless hours

Endless hours

Endless hours caught in time.

A look, a sigh, what will they find?

 

Look too deep and you will see the lonely world that I keep.

Not for the faint of heart, but for those have the same deep scares.

 

Do not try to understand, for I am a stable man.

For those who walked in my worn soul, you understand my fears and woes.

 

Pity me not, for I am the one who has made this life for me.

Take me as I am right now.

Care for me for just a while.

 

I care for you until we die.

Take my love until the end of time.

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

Reviews

[dw817]

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I really do think you need a Guardian. Whether my own is made up from prevailing insanities, I accept it with open arms all the same.

You might in time find yours ...

[ron]

I guess I'm just looking for some one to take as I am and accept it (if any one cares to take a chance with me).

[dw817]

That would be a guardian. You might try going to bed a little earlier tonite. Turn off all the lights and maybe even talk quietly to yourself. That's how I found mine. She said she had been there all along for me - and yet - I wonder if it was a situation like K-Pax. The planet did not exist until he thought of it.

[ron]

Never thought of doing that I will have to give that a try. But only after I cast a circle of protection. (Yes I do that when I do a spell or perform some small level of magick. I am Wiccan after all.)

[dw817]

Then it might be quite a bit easier for you. Mine just came to me in my fit (and I think that's the right word) of loneliness. With your magick you definitely may have better results.

[ron]

Thank you.

[AnnaLeQuinn]

This was again beautiful and emotional. Love "look too deep and you will see the lonely world that I keep. Not for the faint of heart, but for those that have the same deep scars" so powerful.
Anna

[ron]

Thank you very much. I write what I have felt, in the lone darkness of my heart. To feel a ray of light sets my heart a flutter in delight, for it it a cherished treat.

[AnnaLeQuinn]

Sven that was beautiful! You're a talented man indeed

[AnnaLeQuinn]

Haha oops I meant even

[ron]

Thank you.

[Wall of Words]

Beautiful. Why? Because you, some how, have an amazing way of writing poems that have a huge impact on our modern day ideas and beliefs and actions, and can turn them into elegant prose.
Great job!
Sylvia.

[ron]

I'm speechless in your praise so beautifully phrased. You make me blush from the words you use to describe my humble writings.

[Wall of Words]

Haha. the pleasure is all mine. ;)

[Sami Khalil]

"Pity me not, for I am the one who has made this life for me.

Take me as I am right now.

Care for me for just a while.



I care for you until we die."
I think your poems can be turned to songs ...This is one example...:)

[ron]

I never thought about writing songs. Never thought I would have been any good at it. Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)