Water

Water

Flowing, flowing ever moving forward.

Cut through rocks and valleys deep.

Carrying life in your wake.

 

Refreshing is your sound.

How sweet your taste.

Giving life at every turn.

 

Clear, blue, sea foam green.

Falling from the sky, making rainbows beam.

 Deserts need you jungles love you.

Life flourishes with your every dew.

 

What a wonder to behold when first you graced this world and started life, as we know it.

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very different thing to write about, water. I dont know if im good enough to write about something so simple as water i wouldnt know what to say.
Creative write

[ron]

Thank you. I belive you could if it took you. Your writing is far better than mine so I do belive you could.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i dont know about that your a great writer im not that great :)
Thank you so much for thinking so means allot :)

[ron]

Your writing is much more rifined than mine is you write the way I dream of being able to.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

geez lol your making me feel allot better then i am lol.
Thank you so much for thinking so highly of my writing :)
I promise you can write better in time :)

[ron]

Thank you. Your very very kind

[ron]

I wish I had some one as suportive who writes like you are in my life. If you know some one please let them know about me.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i would be honoured to be your friend you seem really nice. Do you mean girlfriend like?
Im sure someone special is out there just for you you'll find her :)

[ron]

Thank you I hope so. I did not mean you as a girlfriend as it seems you allready have some one in your life. But I am hoping that one would come into my life.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

i know you didn't mean me silly :P
I thought so, Im sure you will find someone soon :)