Loving Embrace

Loving Embrace

 

The ocean breeze of your love caresses my body, soothing my soul.

Take me now; take me in your loving embrace.

 

The fires of passion burning deep in your eyes.

How can I ever compare in the shadows of your life?

 

Your kiss is deep warming my soul.

Quenching, feeding my emotions more.

 

Your touch digs deep in my life.

Fires stoked, desires fed what could not be said.

 

Take you in my loving embrace, holding you tight under the moons gaze.

See my love for you burn in my eyes, consuming all of your deepest desires.

Reviews

[ayosonolowo]

A love poem indeed
i really like the way you keep it
nicely done ''ron'' please keep it up

[ron]

Thank you.

[ayosonolowo]

You're welcome

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very deep and romantic, truly coming from your heart makes for the best poems.
So touching and full of emotion, tells a great story.
Only thing that could have made it better is if it rhymed a little more

[ron]

Thank you. I will work on making it better.

[ron]

Thank you. I will work on that.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

some people dont like to rhyme that much they like free verse so if its not your thing you dont have to. I just think it sounds better when rhymed is all :) But great write :)

[ron]

I do wish I could rhyme more in my writeings

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you will get better i have improved so much over the years. So will you :)

[ron]

Thank you.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :)

[Blissful Sin]

:') All I can say is, beautiful work and great job.

-Bliss

[ron]

Thank you. :)