Start from the Beginning

Start from the Beginning

 

Stolen glances soft embraces. This is love in the beginning stages.

 

Soft embraces tender kisses. This is love as it starts to form.

 

Tender kisses closer embrace. This is love as it starts to form shape.

 

Closer embraces exposed ambitions. This is love with deeper traces.

 

Exposed ambitions and building anticipations. This is love as a physical emotion.

 

Building anticipations shunned advances. Damn it now I have to start from the beginning.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Yep, love is a little like Snakes & Ladders. If you get too ambitious playing the game, it's a long ways down to the bottom. :)

[ron]

Lol. Thats how it goes with me most of the time.

[dw817]

But Ron, if you can't change the board, change yourself. Something my Dad never believed in was luck. He would make his own entirely. And if he didn't like the way things were happening, he would warp reality to suit him as well. He told me it is all a matter of perception and conviction.

[ron]

That is very true.

[shallimarRose]

LOL a bit of a shadow poem.. I I love the direction you took this and then slapped us with the surprize ending.. I didnt even see it coming.. xoxo

[ron]

Lol. Ya when it came out it suprized me to.

[shallimarRose]

LOL I love it when that happens.. hehehe

[ron]

Thats the way most if not all of my writings are, they take me were they want to.

[shallimarRose]

Thats what I love about writing too Ron.. I am working on a mystery novel and i am always waiting to see what happens next because the ink goes where it wants lol.. Have a wonderful day.. xo

[ron]

Thank you, and you have a good day also.

[RainDancer1997]

Beautiful and romantic poem:)

[ron]

Thank you.