History in the future

History in the future

 

Has man forgotten what time has not?

Do we dare to continue on our path of destruction?

 

Could you, if you had the chance, change what others will not?

 

Listen to the winds of the past.

It will show us what man will not.

 

On ward time continues.

Follow it or it will consume you.

Reviews

[dw817]

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Reading this reminds me of what the WIND sang to Pocahontas in the movie by the same name.

"The earth is just a dead thing you can claim
But I know every rock and tree and creature
Has a life, has a spirit, has a name."

"Have you ever heard the wolf cry to the blue corn moon
Or asked the grinning bobcat why he grinned
Can you sing with all the voices of the mountain
Can you paint with all the colors of the wind ?

Your entry here, like hers - are definitely a reflection and introspection into the self - man's memorable past, man's unsteady future, and our turning point of NOW.

[ron]

Interesting take on it, but your words sound true. Thank you for the very nice review.

[dw817]

Certainly. :)

[Ruth]

And even though wisdom is abound, so many choose to not listen, wonderful hon x

[ron]

Thank you.

[RainDancer1997]

Really great poem:) Everything is about time

[ron]

Thank you. I'm not sure were all this comes from, I just start off with the first line and every thing else kid of just follows.

[Sami Khalil]

"Listen to the winds of the past.

It will show us what man will not.



On ward time continues.

Fallow it or it will consume you."
I like this write a lot ...Is it fallow or follow...Good poem...:)

[ron]

Thank you. Thanks for catching the typo. It was ment to be follow.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...You are welcome...:)