One last dive

One last dive

 

The storm rages on, wind and sleet, how the pain numbs.

Blind to the edge of the cliff, I fly.

 

Taken to the edge I look down.

Not the bottom I see.

 

Going faster blind to what is before me.

Take me to the edge and back again.

 

Closer I fall, faster I fly.

Again, to the edge, I can taste it calling to me.

 

Calling, calling, its song so sweet.

Take me now let the pain float away.

 

I close my eyes and make one last dive.

The air rushing by, wind tearing at my flesh.

 

I smile one last tear as the ground comes closer.

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

"Closer I fall, faster I fly.
Again, to the edge, I can taste it calling to me.
Calling, calling, its song so sweet.
Take me now let the pain float away."

Ron I am not sure if this is all metaphor? Do you by any chance experience flying dreams?
I have them and I swear this is just how I feel.. I am scared of flying but yet I love the feeling of flying in my flying dreams.. feeling that rush. A thought provoking piece for me. ty, shallimarRose

[ron]

Thank you Rose. No it's how I feel when my heart is weighted down and it pulls me to my death inside of me.

[Sheila Kline]

And that's just how we feel at times.........me more times than I care to reveal!!
It is good to get it out Ron - helps heal the soul!! Your term, "I smile one last tear" is especially touching!

[ron]

Thank you Sheila. Not sure about the healing though, that takes a lot.

[Laminators Dubai]

i cant help it...i loved it!!!!
so deep...
thanks for.sharing this....hero
keep up always louder
glitchy^^

[ron]

Thank you glitch. It was about the last dive of the heart.