Take me

Take me

 

The fire burns hot, the rain begins to steam.

Take this moment, make it part of time.

 

Hesitate and it will leave you cold and wanting.

Take this moment, make yours to tame.

 

If the rush is to fast, it will carry you in its wake.

Hold to the shore of your desires.

 

Faster, faster it goes, wind rushing in to take your breath.

Do not lose control.

 

Slower now it begins to build, slow the tempo or you will burn to fast.

Take your time or you will not last.

 

Faster, faster the rhythm lost in the moment; lost in time.

Wind blowing out of control, take it, TAKE IT.

 

Do not waist the time I give you or I will run away.

Do not think, do not stay still.

 

The time is now.

Take it, TAKE ME…

NOWWWW!!!

Author's Note

This is not about what you think it is.

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Awesome poem Ron. Keep up the great work

[ron]

Thank you. I will try.

[Hatchling]

You're welcome

[shallimarRose]

LOL It's not? well how about a 'lil hint? Nice poem. shallimarRose

[ron]

Your welcome Rose. Its about falling in love...or not...lol. The reader should decide.

[Laminators Dubai]

im thinking about umbrella....lol
its partly sounds what we dont want to think...but it happens with me too...you say something people get something else....
thanks for sharing all the way long...^^

[ron]

Thank you. I wrote this way to see what every ones take on it would be.