Take a journey with me

Take a journey with me

A Poem by ron

Take a journey with me

 

Ever just, listen to the words as they fall around?

Ever wonder what the words say?

 

They speak of feelings given in the shadows of your heart.

Come with me to the open forest that closes in.

 

We will hear the rain fall and see the wind blow.

Look across the lake; and tell me if you see a light dimly burning.

 

Take me with you in your fantasy of dreams.

Take me no closer than the edge of your heart.

 

Come and I will show you a world not seen, a world that shows others nothing but the edge of shadows as they light the dreams of those who cannot feel.

© 2013 ron


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"Take me no closer than the edge of your heart" This is a beautiful line Ron.
enjoyed, shallimarRose

Posted 12 Years Ago


ron

12 Years Ago

Thank you Rose. One should always keep their distance from love until they know its real.
Your words truly take the reader on a journey. This really puts one in the moment.

Posted 12 Years Ago


ron

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
so sweet...sweeter than ever...with little sadness...
thanks for sharing the world! :D
^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


ron

12 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..