Oceans Tide

Oceans Tide

 

Sitting on an Island watching sunsets come and go.

The stars make their journey across the horizon.

 

Does the moon shine bright on your love?

Do the stars show you the way?

 

The waves come in and out,

Hitting the sand softly, pulling me out.

 

I could fight the tide…but what’s the use?

It pulls and I let it.

 

Quietly I accept what the ocean has shown me.

 

The waves close over me as I sink to the sandy bottom.

Waiting for you to pull me to the surface…

 …

…?

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Wow another surprise ending. love it shallimarRose

[ron]

Thank you Rose you are always kind in your reviews of my poems..hugs

[Laminators Dubai]

It pulls and I let it.....

wow....even its a helpless write....too easy with the hardest...
awesome ron^^

[ron]

Thank you glitch.

[Eva Rosehill]

I loved the imagery in this poem.. It expresses your feelings well, I really enjoyed this piece. I will be reading more..

[ron]

Thank you Eva, I am honored by your words.

[Sami Khalil]

I feel the tug and pull of love in your words as the ocean tides...Bravo

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)