Lost Loves River

Lost Loves River

 

Take the boat along lost loves river.

Dock at the third pier to the left.

The ghost of my dreams will be there.

 

Look not on my face,

The scars hold deep lines of past transgressions.

Deep and full of pain.

 

Do you take the boat?

Or do I stand for eternity waiting for the one who looks for me?

Author's Note

Reviews

[shallimarRose]

Ron sometimes your lines and metaphor simply amaze me.. "Do you take the boat?" Wow powerful wtite on many levels.. shallimarRose

[ron]

Yes some times I take the boat, most of the time I don't.

[M. Stein]

Look not on my face,

The scars hold deep lines of past transgressions.

Deep and full of pain.


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That line is amazing, so wonderful! This is amazing. I can really feel the passion behind this. So good!

[ron]

Thank you Meghan, I appreciate that