Taken without consideration

Taken without consideration

A Poem by ron

Taken without consideration

 

Feelings of trapped love, taken without consideration.

To love someone so much you have to changing them.

 

Love makes us do things to each other.

We will want to change some one for their own good…

Or maybe it’s so they become the one we want to love.

 

I will no longer fit into that mold.

I will not be trained or changed.

I cannot nor will not be your perfect mate.

 

I can love so deeply you can feel it in your core existence.

Do you feel my touch at the edge of your senses?

 

Do you feel my breath on your neck like a soft wind blowing?

Do you feel my heart beating in time with yours?

 

I am trapped…yes trapped because I am afraid to hurt someone.

I would rather take the pain than hurt another.

 

I know in the end this will hurt her more than anything I will feel right now.

I look for the perfect time to tell her how I feel.

I lie to myself; I know there is no perfect time.

 

Is this what it feels like at the end of time?

To be trapped in limbo for eternity?

© 2013 ron


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Wow! Especially at the last couplet. A very direct, poignant, piece. Thank you for sharing. (Somewhat marred by the rocky 2nd line. :-x)

Posted 12 Years Ago


ron

12 Years Ago

Thank you Denim. I drew from what I am going through right now, just trying to make sense of somethi.. read more

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..