Ring of Fire

Ring of Fire

 

Fall with me into the ring of fire,

I don’t have much but what I have is pure desire.

 

Don’t take this step without feeling…

Felling the need to be there.

 

If you look into my eyes, you will know,

That all my desires are yours to consume.

 

Don’t lead me into the ring of fire,

And let me burn alone.

 

Take all that I am and all that you need,

And feed it until the end of time.

 

Will you walk with me into the…

The ring of fire?

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"That all my desires are yours to consume." Ohh, such passion put into this single line, Ron! :)

[ron]

Thank you Blue Darling. :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

very very nice work Ron. xo winter

[ron]

Thank you Winter xo

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

This piece is 'burning' with intense desire. I like how you equate fire with passion. Nice job!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon.

[Chidoriflower]

Nice. It gives a simple passion such complexity. By the way, I love Johnny Cash's song. I love this poem, also! :3 Excellent.

[ron]

Thank you I appreciate your review.

[Latifa]

great personification i liked how you used the ring of fire to seggest the struggles or the challenges that you're dealing with

[ron]

Thank you. Yes it is a challenge, and it does seam like it can be a ring of fire some times.

[SyberRose]

This makes me think of June Carters song...Ring of Fire...and of course Johnny Cash...they had a
very passionate relationship...Loved the first verse and the entire poem...nicely penned Ron...Rose:)

[ron]

Thank you Rose. I was thinking of that song when I wrote this. :)

[Ruth]

That's the question isn't it...so many times we do walk alone...into the fire....whether we let it consume...well....a hand held is better than not x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth. Yes it is.