Memories of future feelings

Memories of future feelings

 

Colors, shapes, and feelings,

Walk across the empty pavement of my mind,

Covered in a shroud of veiled emotions.

 

In the light my shadow plays,

While I find solace in the empty fields.

 

I reach for empty arms that once embraced me.

Now only wisps of foggy memories remain.

One by one they visit, less and less.

 

I turn down the unknown streets; leave the light of my memories behind,

As shadows of the future walk past and greet me.

Author's Note

I just started writing and this is what came out.

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

The title itself is very intriguing and that what draws readers to this. The poem is filled with sadness but you ended it with a positive note. I like this. :)

[ron]

Thank you Blue. :)

[FlatLineBeauty]

The pain of being lonely is a heavy burden to bare. xo Winter

[ron]

Yes it is. Some times it's hard to put in words and convey feelings I am having.

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

'Shadows of the future walk past and greet me." An amazing line to ponder. Well penned!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon. Big hugs.

[Ruth]

Wonderful! Different slant...has edge and such emotion, one of your best love, really is xx

[ron]

Thank you very much Ruth. xx

[Ruth]

My pleasure xx

[Frieda P]

Outstanding ron...love the title, what a genius concept. Great read! Going in my favs.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. I'm honored.

[Frieda P]

Well deserved, I really enjoyed this one ron. :-)

[SyberRose]

I love this...Everyone has those foggy distant memories....i like the eerie dark feel to this Ron...Rose:)

[ron]

Thank you Rose :)

[Laminators Dubai]

something unusual from your pen...
it happens....sometime we miss that...and ask self...why can't we fix that?

I like it^^

[ron]

Thank you glitch.

[Laminators Dubai]

................. :D

[Latifa]

omg really stunning piece from you ron this is my favorite it's like i read a saga of emotions mixed with philosofical reviews awesome piece indeed

[ron]

-blushing- Thank you Latia you are very sweet.

[Sami Khalil]

Your writes are always touching and wonderful...Bravo

[ron]

Thank you Sami. I always look forward to your reviews.

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:)