You have no Idea what you do to me

You have no Idea what you do to me

 

Could you imagine what you do to me?

Could you think that you make me feel this way?

 

The words you write are more than my body could believe.

You write with such passion, and turn my mind to frenzy.

 

Is this what you wanted?

To make my body want what your words have spoken?

 

You ignite my desires to flames.

You make my dreams want more.

 

Take me now, as your words have said.

 Make me want you more and more.

 

You make a simple word speak volumes in the heat of passion.

You make my body beg for more.

 

Please do not forsake me,

For I am yours to command.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

There is truth in your words. Poetry can wrap around your heart. I love the tenderness of this beautiful poem.

:) Julie

[ron]

Thank you Julie, you are so kind :)

[Sarmelendez]

Wow this is such a good write, I Love the way that it flowed. I cant wait read more

[ron]

Thank you Sarah. Please I would love to get your thoughts on my writings.

[Sami Khalil]

"Please do not forsake me,

For I am yours to command."

A feel a soldier of love talking ... He is ready to follow her command...Bravo

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Lydia Shutter]

It's so true....the poetry we read can entice and enthrall. Words written on a page come to life if the reader is truly a fan of the art. You have said it so well here. Lydi**

[ron]

Thank you for your kind words Lydi

[Dreamer]

I love this piece. it's a very sweet poem filled with emotion. I'm jealous!!

[ron]

Thank you. You have nothing to be jealous of, your writing is very good.

[Dreamer]

thank you very much!

[ron]

You are most welcome

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is truly truly a sweet poem with emotion in every word.Great one ron I am so jealous lol

[ron]

blushing, thank you Vidja. No matter how I write my words don't come close to conveying what I am feeling.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You blushing again ron?Your words convey a lot and very beautifully too

[ron]

You are very kind Vidja. It just feels like no matter how I describe anything it's still missing something.

[Vidya Bacchus]

That is probably because you are a perfectionist.

[ron]

No I am not. Its just hard for me to put into words feelings and emotions. trust me if any one really knew what goes on in my head...well lets just say no one would believe it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay i hear you

[MandaBear]

This is really a sweet poem. You really feel the passion and the love emanating from this. Great write Ron. 100/100 Writer points =)

[ron]

Thank you Amanda. You are so sweet to say.

[MandaBear]

I mean every word =3 This is truly awesome

[Nebunova]

100 gold stars for you! this resonates with me on a very intense level....perfectly describes the feelings that i've been having trouble grasping. "you make a simple word speak volumes in the heat of passion" when a person is able to take a complicated subject or idea and simplify in such a way that doesn't strip it of its value or significance, is quite arousing, to say the least. thank you for sharing this. ~nebunova

[ron]

Wow. Thank you so much for your words Nebunova.

[Ivory'lee]

Can I reply to this you inspired me????? I love it!! Well written like all your work.

[ron]

You are so sweet Ivory. Yes you can reply to this you inspired me.

[Ivory'lee]

Really??? I did???

[ron]

Yes.......

[Ivory'lee]

I'm kinda shocked no ones ever inspired by me.....