To Love a last minute sorrow

I don't know where this one came from. The title came to me and the poem did follow.

To Love a last minute sorrow

 

To Love a last minute sorrow,

Is to love the last breath or touch of a loved one.

 

To feel their soul as they slip away.

To know they have loved you in their own way.

 

It would be the last thing they feel,

Your heart around their love as we lay them to rest.

 

Ti's not a sweet parting,

But a continuous love.

 

To remember them always is the greatest gift of love.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think the title suits it.Your words are very sad and true,losing someone we love is never easy nor should it be.As usual your words have touched me deeply:)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. You are most kind.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are most welcome Ron:)

[Sami Khalil]

"To Love a last minute sorrow,

Is to love the last breath or touch of a loved one.



To feel their soul as they slip away.

To know they have loved you in their own way."

This was amazing especially those lines...:).....................

[ron]

Thank you so much Sami. I'm not sure the title fits though.

[Sami Khalil]

It does...You are welcome...:).....................

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

Always welcome...:).....................