My first time again

My first time again

Sit beside me and take my hand,

feel how it shakes.

Place your hand over my heart,

feel how the beating gets strong with ever moment.

Hold me in your arms,

feel how my body warms against yours.

Place your lips upon mine,

taste how hungry they are.

Undress me slowly,

I shiver from excitement.

This is how I wish my first time would have been.

I am still just as clumsy,

but with one single difference...

I know so much more then the first time I tried to kiss.

Reviews

[whoopsydaisy]

oh wow. now this is an experience i have yet to feel! Hahaha beautiful write!
-Dragon

[ron]

It can be a wonderful experience with the right person. Thank you. I know you would make a perfect first kiss.

[whoopsydaisy]

awww thanks

[FlatLineBeauty]

That first kiss with someone new can sometimes certainly feel like that first kiss ever. I get just as nervous as i did the first time, but it is such a sweet surrender. xo Winter

[ron]

I completely agree it can be. xo Thank you.

[Latifa]

sweet piece of writing Ron

[ron]

Thank you Latifa, you are to kind.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Ah, the first kiss... a beautiful moment.

[ron]

Thank you poetic. Yes the first one and all the others after it should be like this.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

That they should.

[Cody Williams]

Very sweet piece Ron! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

[ron]

Thank you Cody, it was pleasure.

[Lyn Anderson]

I love this. very sweet. I am pretty sure you meant to say put your hand over my heart. Not sure if the change in format at the end is intentional or not

[ron]

Thank you KL, yes I did mean "my" instead of "me". the change was intentional at the end.

[Ruth]

Ah, first times, yes...can only make you stronger and learn, as we all do x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth x

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is how it is supposed to be,and how you're supposed to feel.IF i said it once i have said it a hundred times your words make me all warm and fuzzy:) I am sure you know how to do everything better now as it is'nt your first time that helps lol

[ron]

Thank you Vidja. Just knowing is not enough. Sometimes I feel like that same clumsy boy, uncoordinated and all thumbs.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well in that case you need more practice,as they say it makes perfect lol

[ron]

Lol. Maybe.

[Sami Khalil]

I felt the innocense in this poem or the reclaiming of it...Bravo....................

[ron]

Thank you Sami. I was trying to go in a different direction but the poem wouldn't let me lol.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)..................