The edge of our love

The edge of our love

Love so sweetly it can be felt from afar.

It can be tasted and held in your loving embrace.

Would the lips of your passion be felt on your words?

Could your loving embrace feel the beat of my heart?

Oh what I would give for just a sweet moment

of your love for me in my darkest of moments.

Your heart I would feel as it beat with passion.

Your breath on my skin would command me to submission.

Just for a taste of your sweet love so divine,

I would give all that I am as our desires intertwined.

Shh my dear dream, lie there and sleep.

I will come to you dreams at the edge of our love.

Reviews

[Ivory'lee]

I feel as if she were laying in your arms and you whispered into her ear as she slept.

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. I lie in her arms of misty dreams and wait for her to come for me.

[Ivory'lee]

In the night she'll come and you'll wake in her arms and she in yours.

[ron]

If dreams could come true...well I will leave it at that.

[Pax]

The title really drawn me here, it so shiny :)

Oh, the ending was unexpected to me. Perhaps I was expecting this piece is kinda a confession. Yet it is true that our dreams put as far as we go for our love for someone. It is always amazing that in our darkest moments, love would guide through and push us higher into a good place.

Very nice piece.

[ron]

Thank you Pax. Yes sometimes our dreams (at least mine) can do that for us.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I have run out of words to use to describe your absolute command of the written word.You made me feel warm in the region of my heart .Lord that was as unpoetic as i could possibly get lol.Your words always make me smile:)

[ron]

They are very poetic Vidja. Thank you for reading and you are most welcome.

[Vidya Bacchus]

..................lol:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such an enchanting write, Ron. Dreamy and romantic. The longing is palpable. Even if only in dreams, the feelings you describe are of a very real romance. Gentle and tender. Heavy sigh! Lydi**

[ron]

You are most kind dear Lydia. Big hugs.

[Sami Khalil]

Beautifully written and seductively driven...Bravo...................
You have a typo: Divine not devine

[ron]

Thank you Sami. I will fix the typo thank you for letting me know.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:)...............