Looking deep in your passion

Looking deep in your passion

 

I sit just outside of your view.

I absently lick my lips with just the edge of my tongue,

and wonder to my self what your deepest passion is.

 

I crook my head ever so slightly and smile a shy playful grin.

Would you think me a fool if I just sat here and wondered,

what are the things that makes your blood burn with passion.

 

You twist the end of your hair with just one finger.

You blush at what some one just told you.

Your smile makes my heart beat faster.

 

I know you would not want me, this I am certain of.

But you make my dreams come true when it’s just me alone in the dark.

If you ever noticed me I would fall apart, studder and blush.

 

So for now I feel content to watch you and wonder from afar.

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I like this playful passion, alone in the dark, I won't even ask...ha, nice dreamy sentiment here ron. ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. Alone in the dark would be me curling up to a pillow and wishing my arms were around her, holding her. Nothing else...lol ;-)

[Frieda P]

Ha, I knew you'd say that lol ;-) My pleasure ron..............

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes the wondering is better than the real thing...there is no disappointment only fantasy.

nicely expressed here.

[ron]

Thank you Jacob. Yes it can be, it seems that this is as close as my shyness would allow me in real life.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Into my faves, because you looked past the lust...and into her heart...and yours...xx

[ron]

The heart is were true love starts. Thank you Robbie I am honored...xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I truly enjoyed the wistful tone of your write, Ron..
This unfolds the mystery of your thoughts..
a peek into your blushing mind as you admire and wonder.

Now this... This is enchanting! ~xoxo~:)

[ron]

Thank you Robbie. I am speechless from your review -blushing a bright red-

[Robbie~xoxo~]

LOL I adore blushings!...it's my pleasure, dear friend. Xx:)