Tied too the shadows

Tied too the shadows

 

 

Tied too the shadows,

to shy to come into the light.

 

I watch as you slowly do what you love.

If I come into the light you would see who I am.

 

For now the dreams of you I have,

will have to be shared with my soft lonely nights.

 

Would you hate me and shun me,

if you saw the face of who I am?

 

I can’t take that chance,

for now I can still have you (even if it’s in my soft lonely nights).

It’s there that you love me and accept who I am.

 

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Tied too the shadows


Tied too the shadows,
to(o) shy to come into the light.

I watch as you slowly do what you love.
If I come into the light you would see who I am.

Ladies love a man to serenade them and this one is one of those beautiful serenades...Bravo.............

[ron]

Thank you Sami. You are most kind.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)............................

[Lyn Anderson]

This is so beautiful, truthful, romantic. Just missing the extra o in Too on first stanza :)

[ron]

Thank you KL. I will change it. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

Sorry I confused you. The correction by Sami is the one I was getting at. My bad.

[ron]

This is to much work I give up...lol

[Lyn Anderson]

Aww I am sorry. Hey, the offer stands always, to pass it by me before posting. I don't mind at all keeping such things between you and me:)

[ron]

Oh the rumors that would fly if I passed anything on to you...;) I will try and do that in the future KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

What do I give a blank about rumours? I already have someone on here who hates me and wants me off.

[ron]

Tell me who it is, I will have words with the cad.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Maybe you should just come into the light you have made yourself too accustomed to the dark.

[ron]

If I had someone who would guide me I might.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I suspect you have more than enough people willing to guide you :)

[ron]

Maybe. But it is only a few that would be gentle and loving as they do. So I wait for her to come to me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lucky lady that one :)

[ron]

All she has to do is take my hand and I will follow her where she takes me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well you can't be too trusting now .Women are sly as hell :)

[ron]

When the right woman comes for me I will know it deep in my heart.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay as long as its your heart that you are thinking with lol

[ron]

It is my heart that leads me to were I love to play.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay then I hear you :)

[ron]

Lol :)....