Forgotten sighs

Forgotten sighs

 

 

Lost in the rapture of blissful sighs,

I am held mesmerized by the soft sounds you make.

 

Forgotten in the moment,

as pages of passion turn to the next chapter.

 

Words painted with breathless expressions,

I am on edge with each new sentence.

 

Would you write me a diary of things held by the moonlight?

Would you paint me a poem wet with love?

 

Your forgotten sighs,

I would make book marks of them to guide me through your desires.

 

Cover my thoughts with secrets,

only you and I would know.

 

I will write you a poem of forgotten sighs,

and seal each one with gentle kisses.

Reviews

[Ruth]

Beautiful, paying attention to ALL aspects...always a good thing ;) x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth. If only my body would work like my mind...well if only.

[Ruth]

lol Ah, you can master that tho...

[ron]

Maybe one day...

[Ivory'lee]

"I will write you a poem of forgotten sighs,

and seal each one with gentle kisses."

No more needs to be said ;)

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. You are to kind.

[ms. barrie]

gorgeous poem, ron,

the imagery enriched with poignant romance, for the one you long for,

poetic beauty conveyed here...

Would you write me a diary of things held by the moonlight?

Would you paint me a poem wet with love?



Your forgotten sighs,

I would make book marks of them to guide me through your desires.



Cover my thoughts with secrets,

only you and I would know.



I will write you a poem of forgotten sighs,

and seal each one with gentle kisses.

...this is nothing short that being amazing. definitely one of my favs. on here.
thanks for sharing :)

[ron]

Thank you so much

[ms. barrie]

you welcome

[ron]

Thank you so much Barrie.

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome'd ron...it's a beautiful poem, i enjoyed reading! be well you :)

[ron]

Thank you, and you be well also...:)

[ms. barrie]

Aw, thank you ron, (((hugs)))) :)

[ron]

((hugs))...:)

[ms. barrie]

Thanks ron, it's nice to know someone cares :)

[Sami Khalil]

"I would make book marks of them to guide me through your desires.

Cover my thoughts with secrets,
only you and I would know."

You are guiding love through your romance step by step as if nourishing it from childhood. A wonderful write...:)...............

[ron]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Vidya Bacchus]

"I will write you a poem of forgotten sighs,
and seal each one with gentle kisses." This makes a girl sigh true :P

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.