The kiss

The kiss

 

 

Hands tremble as fingers touch,

electric feelings make way to moistened lips.

 

Hearts beat faster, my mind is whirling.

I cant keep my body from shaking.

 

I have waited a lifetime for this moment,

I never knew I had been waiting.

 

Your eyes sparkle,

your face made from Angels wishes.

 

I think to my self,

“please stop shaking”.

 

Slowly our lips touch,

my mind explodes as emotions come rushing in all at once.

 

I can’t think, I can’t control,

you have taken me beyond my dreams.

 

I have been kissed by an Angel.

 

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is truly very romantic, touching and heart felt, and so very beautiful.
Very meaningful, moving piece you have here.
I enjoyed the write, beautifully penned.
Well thought out as well, and great presentation.
I enjoyed the read. Keep writing :)

[ron]

Thank you cimmy :0

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Anytime Ron :)

[lily]

You always seem to have such a way with words, Ron. This is so well crafted.
Utterly amazing.

[ron]

Thank you Lily. You are so kind.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well who knew .You been kissed by an Angel Red ? This is very lovely hunny ,tres bien yes :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes tres bien :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Red :)

[Eric Pudalov]

This is so very romantic, Ron. And I must admit, I read your conversation with noodle below...I certainly hope that this "someone special" appreciates your poem! Though I can't speak for her...if a woman had read it to me, I think it would work on me! :-P

[ron]

Thank you Erick. I think she does. :-P

[s y e]

Oooo, Eric my internet stalker, jokes.

[Eric Pudalov]

LOL, I just couldn't resist.

[s y e]

Ha, you know I love you really. ;-)

[ron]

Sye fans come out...lol

[s y e]

Wooooo, check this. You have me swooning here Ron. Have you been kissed by an Angel? :-) This is utterly romantic, my sweet friend. You're definitely going to have all the beautiful ladies here swooning and wanting more. I know I want more. ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I don't know about that -blushing- ;-)

[s y e]

You will silly, they will be begging for more. Might even be begging you for a kiss like that! ;-)

[ron]

I'm saving that kiss for someone special. ;-)

[s y e]

Ooooo, being all mysterious.

[ron]

Maybe, but I hope she knows who I am talking about.

[s y e]

I'm pretty sure once she reads this she will. She won't even think twice.

[ron]

I hope so. And I hope she tells me.

[s y e]

I'm she has in her own way, aha.

[ron]

I know she has.

[s y e]

Let me know when she tells you.

[ron]

I think she told me. I'm a guy so I'm a bit slow in such things, but I'm pretty sure she told me...;)

[s y e]

Haha, did she like it? I think us guys are used to your slow minds... you are guys after all.

[ron]

Yes she did like it.

[s y e]

That's good. I knew she would. Who wouldn't? ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Sye ;-)