Love

These are but a few things of what being in Love means to me.

Love

 

 

Love is when...

You can’t breath, waiting for them when their gone.

You can smell their favorite scent when it’s no where to be found.

 

You see them in a crowd when they are not even there.

When you hear their voice in a crowd of whispers.

 

It’s the way your heart beats fast,

when they say a simple word.

 

When your checks flush just watching them,

your mouth becomes dry just thinking of them.

 

When you stumble for words,

but not a sound will come out.

 

You lick your lips absent mindedly,

when you picture their kiss.

 

When you can’t even stand,

because your knees give out.

 

When your hands shake,

longing for just a touch.

 

When you body hurts,

because you think you upset them to much.

 

It makes you second guess,

am I really worth their words.

 

Love is...

when you can feel them deep inside your heart,

inside of your soul,

inside your body,

 inside your life.

Reviews

[s y e]

Love is thousands of things, you've picked up on a few. :) this is marvellous my friend. Another fine job you've done.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I had to force my self to end the poem, my muse still hates me for making it stop. lol

[redflutterby]

Love is...many things. You share many of those feelings perfectly. ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Red. Not so perfectly I would think.

[Frieda P]

Sweet one ron, you about summed up the crazy ways love affects the psyche. I need a shot of this. ;-)

when 'they're' gone

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. You can have all of it. I have nothing more.

[Frieda P]

I doubt that ron, but thanks, and my pleasure...

[ron]

Read "Kryptonite" I just posted. and you might think different.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well hello.This has to be the very best out of all your poems.I hope you are lucky enough to have this:)

[ron]

You say that to almost every thing new I write Vidya...lol. Thank you for your kind words...:) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha I need some new material then lol.I mean it every single time luv:)

[ron]

I know you do :) I'm just not as confident as you are about my writings.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey I am confident enough for the both of us, so just keep writing and making me feel so much with your words yes ?

[ron]

It's a deal Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Cool .Shall we shake on it ?

[ron]

It's a deal. Wish more people would read it though. Maybe I'm getting a big ego or something...lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha people are asleep lol.They will in the morning I swear and would I lie to you :)

[ron]

I'm sorry I guess I'm just stressed out. I know you wouldn't Vidya :).
On my second beer so maybe that's part of it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I had just the one and felt very zen lol

[ron]

You had one beer?

[Vidya Bacchus]

I did and I don't know why I felt so high.It just flew up in my head and down .......not in my head lol

[ron]

Wait tell you have some of my MEAD...;)

[ron]

Last time I drank some I got all philosophical. I swear.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You philosophical.Huh sounds dangerous

[ron]

Ya My a*s was bolted to the seat to...lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Huh that is fricking hilarious lol