Tears that you don’t see

Tears that you don’t see

 

 

 

Take my heart.

I’m so tired, so lonely, so much more than you know.

 

Take my hand and let me follow you through your heart.

Love me as you dreamed of me.

 

If fate would have you gone,

I would cry a thousand tears.

 

I stand in the rain and watch you leave...

could your heart be so cold...

 

Do you not feel me in your soul,

do you not feel me in the places you go?

 

I hide my heart in your soul.

 I hide my self in plain sight.

 

You walk away,

put on your sunglasses,

and disappear in the memories of my love.

 

Tears flow,

I will never show them,

they are mine... not yours.

 

 

Reviews

[Tina Louise UK]

So very touching, heartfelt piece hun :) x

[ron]

Thank you Tia :) x

[Ruth]

The final lines say it all ~ we bear what others do not see, painful at times and yet life keeps spinning ey? x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth. Yes it does. x

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is way too sad for words .Sometimes we can do nothing but watch them go ,knowing that in the long run they will be better off.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Sometimes we have to let the ones we love go.

[Vidya Bacchus]

As you say :)

[s y e]

Alot of pain in this one Ron. This is heartbreaking.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. There was a lot of pain we she left.

[Spacecadet]

Another heartfelt, powerful one. Great job :)

[ron]

Thank you Spacecadet.

[redflutterby]

Such a sad piece filled with longing...sigh. I could feel the pain in this one. ;-)

[ron]

Thank you Red. ;-)

[TheHumbledChild]

I had a dream similar to this piece like just that nostalgic feeling and heartache...brilliant definitely captured those feelings perfectly in my opinion especially because it's not really easy for guys to express so freely and be vulnerable yet still strong and tough as nails

Another good a*s read

[ron]

Thank you HumbledChild. I think writing helps even the strong of us to express what we feel.

[Lyn Anderson]

A sad, heartfelt piece. Well done. One small thing, first stanza, then should be than

[ron]

Thank you KL. I always get confused on those two.

[Lyn Anderson]

You are not the only one. I saw your comments on first love. I feel badly now. I was the one with the sunglasses in my story ...

[ron]

I'm sorry Kl. Some times we find ourselves in a place that we have to leave.

[Lyn Anderson]

Oh, no, in my first love's instance, I was just too young to see what I was giving up. I will send you a read request that will explain a bit better -- it's too hard to sift through my 400 + works.

[ron]

Lol Our first young love can be the hardest. Mine was in first grade. Her and I had a coloring book we colored in together, it was ours. then she let some other boy color in it one day. The first time my heart was broken.

[kublakhan27]

Again you have struck a deep chord with me...I haven't been granted the opportunity to feel this way very often in my life, but quantity outduels quality in such matters. I suppose we all have some number of tears we suppress, but this one almost succeeds in eliminating some of mine. Outstanding work.

[ron]

Thank you and you are most welcome. Thank you for entering my mind.